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STUDENT: Tristan Smith TEACHER: Mrs. Torres-Stephens

LEAD: You are alone in a strange place. The items you own are a pen, manuscript, map of your present location, suit, a photo of your favorite person, bamuda shorts and year's supply of bus tokens.

Prewrite please. Date and time every entry. starting time 1:56 Primal The plane trip began at 8:15am, it was a trip across one of the forest regions in America though Brian wasn't sure. The pilot announced that their would be powerful turbulence then with a series of gut wrenching up and downs the plane spun out of control the pilot shouted on the radio,"We are making a crash landing, brace for impact"! Then it hit the ground. Brian woke up up staggering to his feet saying "I'm alive, I'm alive! He couldn't believe himself. then he saw the plane wreckage and stood in pure awe everybody survived but they were all shaken up then Brian felt him about to vomit and he did. Then the pilot said,"Eveybody stay together". Brian checked his things he had a pen,a manucript,map of the present location,suit,a photo of your favorite person,bermuda shorts,and a years supply of bus tokens. Then a bear burst out of the emerald green that was the forest. Brian hopped onto a tree.Probably an hour later or so the bear left, With a sigh of relief he came down. He was lost his sweat shirt was nothing but tattered pieces of cloth material. Then came the mosquitos those terrible bugs he swatted them one by one ten by ten a hundred by a hundred then when night came they left. He lie there thinking of what what was going on . He assesed the situation.Aw it's completely hopeless he just fell to the ground and slept he was fatigued after his experience. When he woke he felt hunger a savage animal like hunger. Suddenly a smell a sweet but slightly bitter smell. Then he spotted a tree with branches so plentiful with berries about the size of blue berries but green. He noticed